Kind of like the story, but poor translation is annoying, probably MTL. Some parts seem better, but anyway, there is a ton of mistakes that a human wouldn't make. Maybe it's some machine learning AI that's trained on space scifi, because the setting seems like 1990ish China but it's full of interstellar fantasy terms like planets(actually means towns or villages), stars or main stars(big cities/capitols), spaceships(actually means normal airplanes and ships) etc.
