VISION GRID SYSTEM: THE COMEBACK OF RYOMA TAKEDA-Chapter 465: Watching the Gatekeeper
The inside of the arena still feels loose, unfinished. Rows of empty seats stretch upward, ushers standing with their hands folded, more hopeful than busy. ππΏπ²ππ πππ»πΌπ―ππ.ππΌπΊ
Okabe cranes his neck, scanning. "We can basically sit anywhere, right?"
Ryohei nods, already stepping sideways into a better angle. "Front is too obvious. Backβs pointless. Somewhere with a clean view, but not dead center."
Meanwhile, Kentaβs eye move more carefully than the rest, gauging sightlines, exits, habits drilled into him by years of corners and waiting rooms.
And thatβs when he spots it. Aki, two sections down, waving her arm just a little too enthusiastically for someone whoβs supposed to be working. When Kenta notices her, she doesnβt stop, just switches to a subtler motion, fingers beckoning.
Kenta exhales. "...Of course."
Ryohei follows his line of sight. Then his eyes widen. "Wait."
Okabe squints. "Is that...?"
With cap pulled low, collar turned up, sits Nakahara, very focused on not being noticed.
Ryoheiβs grin spreads instantly. "Oh. This is too good."
Okabe is already moving. "He said he wasnβt watching."
They peel off without warning, leaving Kenta mid-step. Ryohei cups his hands, stage-whispering as they approach.
"Coach! Fancy seeing you here!"
Nakahara stiffens. Slowly, painfully, he lowers his collar just enough to glare at them.
"...Sit down."
Okabe beams. "So you are watching."
"I am sitting," Nakahara snaps.
"Watching very intensely," Ryohei adds.
Meanwhile, Aramaki is still standing, eyes locked on the ring, barely registering what just happened. It takes a firm nudge from Kenta to pull him back.
"...Huh?" Aramaki blinks.
"Letβs take a seat," Kenta mutters, steering him along.
By the time they reach the row, Aki is already smiling like she orchestrated this from the start. Tanaka and Sato shift to make room, amused rather than surprised.
"Well," Aki says lightly, "looks like weβve got a full table."
Nakahara sighs, long and tired, staring straight ahead. "...I hate crowded divisions."
Ryohei grins. "But you love crowded seats."
The opening bell cuts him off.
Ding!
Nakaharaβs head snaps up. "Quiet," he says flatly. "Or go talk somewhere else."
"Okay, okay," Ryohei mutters, dropping into the seat on Nakaharaβs right.
Okabe slides in on the other sideβ, nly to be stopped mid-motion by a firm hand on his arm.
"Move," Nakahara says.
Okabe freezes. "What?"
Nakahara points without looking. "You. Over there."
He gestures at Aramaki.
Aramaki blinks. "Me?"
"Yes. Sit here."
Okabeβs mouth falls open. "Hey! Thatβs favoritism!"
Nakahara finally turns his head. "This is his division."
"So?"
"So he watches it properly." Nakahara pats the seat. "Here, right beside me."
Aramaki hesitates, then sits, eyes already drawn back to the ring.
Okabe slumps into the next seat over, arms crossed. "Unbelievable."
Nakahara doesnβt bother lowering his voice. "If you donβt like it, go sit somewhere else."
Okabe clicks his tongue, but stays put as the fighters step forward, gloves touching, the fight already unfolding in front of them.
Nakahara clears his throat, straightening slightly. "For the record," he says, eyes fixed on the ring, "I didnβt come here for Shimamuraβs fight. I came for this. Itβs important for Aramakiβs future."
Aki, Tanaka, and Sato exchange a glance, and then promptly look away, shoulders tightening as they struggle not to laugh out loud.
***
Back in the ring, the fight starts with slow pace. Takata Eisaku, the top ranker, glides to center ring with small precise steps, shoulders loose, guard high but relaxed. From the opening second, the distance belongs to him.
Sonoda Eizan tries to claim ground immediately, edging forward behind a tight guard, chin tucked. Heβs compact, coiled, the posture of a man who wants to shorten the fight and turn it into pressure. But every step he takes is met with Takataβs jab, long, probing, not thrown for damage, but for ownership.
Dug. Dug.
Dug. Dug. Bug. Dug.
The jab snaps Sonodaβs head just enough to disrupt his rhythm.
"Good control early by Takata," the commentator notes. "Heβs establishing range right away."
Takata circles clockwise, never crossing his feet, never letting Sonoda set his stance. When Sonoda finally commits, dipping his shoulders, trying to slip inside, Takata slides half a step back and threads a straight right down the middle.
It lands clean, sharp enough to draw a murmur from the crowd.
Sonoda grunts, presses forward again.
But Takata doesnβt retreat in a straight line. He angles out, pivots, taps the body with a flicking jab, and then resets. Every exchange ends on his terms. One punch, sometimes two, and then gone.
"Textbook out-boxing," the second commentator adds. "Takataβs not giving him anything to counter."
Midway through the round, Sonoda attempts to cut off the ring, stepping laterally instead of forward.
For a moment, Takata is near the ropes, and the crowd stirs.
But Takata answers calmly like what a veteran would; jab to the chest, quick hook upstairs, then a smooth pivot that leaves Sonoda swinging at air.
The distance reappears like a pulled curtain. Sonoda exhales sharply, frustration creeping in.
In the final seconds, Takata steps in just enough to score with a crisp one-two, then slides away as the bell rings.
Ding!
"A clear opening round for Takata Eisaku," the commentator declares. "Heβs showing exactly why heβs ranked number one."
Sonoda returns to his corner tight-lipped. And Takata walks back smoothly, already in control.
Aramaki doesnβt clap, doesnβt breathe out. He just sits there, shoulders stiff, eyes locked on the ring as if the canvas might suddenly open and swallow him whole.
Nakahara watches him from the corner of his eye. "Well?" he asks. "What do you think?"
Thereβs no answer. Aramakiβs still trapped inside his own thoughts. Nakahara then clicks his tongue and nudges Aramakiβs arm with his elbow.
"Hey."
Aramaki jolts. "Ah, yes?"
"You look like youβre about to fight a ghost," Nakahara says. "Whatβs wrong?"
"N-nothing..." Aramaki hesitates, eyes still on the ring. "Itβs just... the level..."
"Itβs too high," Nakahara finishes for him.
Aramaki swallows. "Y-yeah. I feel like... if I were in there, I donβt think I could land a single punch."
Nakahara nods once, as if that answer was expected. "Takata looks dominant because he is, for right now," he says. "Longer frame. Longer reach. He doesnβt need to force anything. Sonoda has to cross the river just to touch him."
Aramakiβs hands curl slightly on his knees. His reach is shorter than Sonodaβs. And he knows what that means.
Nakahara continues, unkind but precise. "Against someone like you? That gap looks even worse."
Aramaki nods silently, the weight settling heavier.
Then Nakahara speaks again. "But donβt get drunk on first impressions," he says. "Super featherweight doesnβt keep kings for long. Rankings change because no oneβs untouchable."
Aramaki looks up, eyes searching Nakaharaβs profile, clinging to the unspoken hope that a door still exists, somewhere he just hasnβt learned to see yet.
"Even Takata," Nakahara adds. "Especially veterans. They all have habits. And weaknesses."
His gaze shifts back to the ring. "And donβt you dare take your eyes off Sonoda. That man is good. Heβs still in this."
Aramaki nods again, this time sharper, more focused, his tension no longer just fear, but something closer to hunger.
***
Round two only deepens the gap.
Takata Eisaku settles into complete command, the kind that doesnβt look flashy unless you know what youβre watching. He drifts laterally, heels barely touching the canvas, eyes fixed on Sonodaβs chest rather than his head.
The jab snaps out again and again, not heavy, not reckless, but precise. Each one lands with a dull thud that halts Sonodaβs advance by half a step.
"Beautiful distance control," the commentator says, voice rising with admiration. "This is what a top-ranked out-boxer looks like."
Sonoda tries to adjust. He dips, throws a probing hook to the body, attempts to angle in. Takata responds immediately, one step back, a straight right down the middle, and then gone.
Aramakiβs throat tightens. This isnβt just defense. Itβs a complete denial.
Takata varies the rhythm, double jabs followed by sudden pauses that freeze Sonoda mid-step. When Sonoda lunges, frustrated, Takata meets him with a check hook and spins out, leaving Sonoda punching air.
"Ohhh, thatβs experience!" the other commentator exclaims. "Sonoda canβt find the door. Every time he thinks itβs open, Takata shuts it in his face."
Round three brings more urgency from Sonoda, and more composure from Takata. He leans on Sonoda in the clinch, steals seconds, and then resumes picking him apart at range. A clean right hand snaps Sonodaβs head back, drawing a ripple of noise from the crowd.
"Takata Eisaku is putting on a clinic," comes the call. "This is championship-level control."
And Aramaki feels smaller with every exchange.
He imagines himself in Sonodaβs place, trying to slip the jab, trying to step in with a spear to the body, trying to force close range.
In his mind, none of it works.
And if this is the man guarding the rankings, standing on the gate...
Then what kind of monster waits at the top?
The bell ends the third round, but the pressure doesnβt lift. It settles heavier on Aramakiβs chest, a silent reminder of how far the climb still is.







