MTL - Becoming a Saint by Leisure Reading-~ In 2023, I went on to tell the story.
January 1, 2023, 5.08am.
In the dream, I sat up startled, and came to the desk again.
Regarding the controversy over the plot, I think it is better to talk to everyone.
First of all, Bawan really didn't expect such a reaction, which would attract such a great hostility. What the friends in the group know is that yesterday someone directly attacked @八万 in the group, which has exceeded the limit of complaints. What they don’t know is dozens of insults in private chats and private messages...
Eighty thousand would like to say, not at all.
Of course, since someone has initiated a controversy, Bawan knows that there are still many friends who are not used to speaking out, and they must be uncomfortable, so I will communicate with everyone from the bottom of my heart.
Let me talk about attitude first. Those who celebrate the Chinese New Year are scolded as soon as they come up, and of course 80,000 feels uncomfortable. But after I calmed down, I realized that someone had read the book and got into it, and my thoughts were not clear, and I could understand it after venting it.
So let's talk about the controversy.
In fact, the further a good story goes, the less the author can do. Because the stage has already been set, as long as the characters proceed according to their role logic, the story will develop naturally.
Let's take a look at the plot of the birth of Xiao Aowu. Feng Nanzhi gave birth to the child, there are only two paths in the plot—
First: no one noticed when she was born, Feng Nanzhi proudly raised little Aowu while being her empress;
Second: The current plot, born, was discovered.
If it is the former choice, then what we see is a wave of daily writing, and in the end, we will still return to the second choice.
Quite simply, the Tiger Clan is the nail that the Terran Clan must pull out. But with Feng Nanzhi as the patriarch, the human race, that is, Chen Luo, couldn't find a suitable reason to start this war.
Because Feng Nanzhi's role is a fire extinguisher. Only with this character logic can the logic of the previous stories in this book be reasonable. But as the story progresses, she needs to temporarily leave that "fire fighting" position.
And the birth of Xiao Aowu provided a plot opportunity for her to leave this position.
Of course, there is also a way of writing, which does not follow the above plot selection. Anyway, the tiger clan can always cause troubles, forcing the human clan to do it...
Full of intrigue and plot, intertwined with misunderstanding and emotion.
However, if it is written like this... Feng Nanzhi is so cruel!
Bawan reiterated once again, Bawan is not Wenqing, and will not abuse for the sake of abuse.
Therefore, this way of writing was ruled out by 80,000 people from the very beginning.
Okay, the logic of the plot is straightened out, let's look at the specific plot expression.
"Idle Book" is the first book of 80,000. It is the 574th day since it was written. I have stepped on a lot of pitfalls along the way. Thank you very much for your patience and tolerance, but today's situation makes me think that I have grown a little The 80,000 people were a little confused again.
"Feng Nanzhi gave birth to little Aowu, and was found by Feng Bugui who came here. Feng Bugui decided to imprison Feng Nanzhi in anger, establish himself as the patriarch, and start the great cause of death for the new generation of the Tiger Clan..."
Is this a poisonous point?
Bawan was really sincere and rushed to give birth to Xiao Aowu on the last day, but he didn't expect it to be a thunderstorm.
I read it over and over again. In the story, firstly, no one was greened, and secondly, no one died; after Feng Bugui came, he just wanted to kill Xiao Aowu out of anger, but was threatened by Feng Nanzhi with the blood of the white tiger, and finally did not do it.
So where are some people angry?
I thought about it for a long time, and after much deliberation, there may be two reasons.
First, the wicked gain power.
In the plot, the overwhelming strength shown by Feng Bugui makes people feel depressing.
Let me say one more thing here, in the setting, the Qiongqi bloodline of the winged tiger is originally the best fighting lineage in the tiger clan. In addition, the reason why Feng Bugui is valued by the Tiger Clan elders naturally has his special reasons. This will be revealed later.
Feng Feifei also said that he hid his strength before the wind did not return. Only this time under the anger, it was exposed.
Second, everyone loves Xiao Aowu too much.
I can't see Xiao Aowu being wronged.
What everyone wants to see is that when little Aowu was born, the stars held the moon, the Qilin King sent a barbecue set meal, the Qinglong Emperor personally recognized the princess of the Southern Wilderness, the temple came to congratulate, and Ye Heng frantically knocked on the seal.
In this way, it is probably cool.
But the story... can't be written like this.
Just like the plot of Huafan, of course I know that everyone wants to watch Wanli, Fengshen, and Chen Luo suppress the barbarians and kill the sky, but still the same sentence, the story is a process.
As readers, you can skip reading; but as a writer, Bawan cannot skip writing.
"Idle Books" has been written to 3.5 million words today, and other authors asked me, how should I write Confucian and Taoist books? In his opinion, Confucianism and Daoist books hold out the freshness of a million words, and after that, they just repeat themselves...
My answer is: Don't pay attention to the three words Confucianism and Taoism, what you write is a story.
For example, that pioneering work, in fact, regardless of the setting of the poem, if you just look at his world building and plot promotion, it is also a first-class story.
A truly responsible author can't rely on emotional hotspots to pile up plots one by one, otherwise the readers will be very happy in the short term, but such a story will end up being a piece of chicken feathers, which consumes everyone's enthusiasm and destroys the author's quality.
Sometimes, I would rather my readers tell me that I want to raise it for a while. In my opinion, this is the patience he gave to 80,000. Of course, I have been following up, I can only say that it is full of love...
Speaking of this, what Bawan actually wants to say is that no matter what the grades are or how Bawan updates, Bawan's original intention of writing a good story for you to read has never changed. As for stories, there are always climaxes and transitions, and there must be some unsatisfactory places. Bawan will still study hard to improve his abilities.
Speaking of the plot itself, like what Bawan just said, I don't know how to write abuse.
Therefore, what has already happened should be the worst case. In fact, in the latest chapter, everyone has also seen that whether it is Niu Dafa or Yun Siyao, these are actually eighty thousand pre-arranged means to break the game.
Please believe me, I also feel sorry for the little one.
Then, let’s talk about the issue of Huafan.
After seeing some readers expressing in large paragraphs in the chapter comments, I really read it carefully.
The plot of Huafan was actually decided during the National Day last year.
Speaking of it, writing Huafan will never avoid the ears. Back then, I had written the outline of the adaptation, the better I had time to talk about the script adaptation of that book, but Accountant Jia ran too fast...
Closer to home.
Explain a few questions.
One, the protagonist knows that his identity is Wang Yun and Wang Bo'an, how could he not know that his soul wears Wang Yangming?
This is the trap of preconceived empiricism, just like in a detective drama, the world you see will always only have those few people.
Most of the characters of the ancients corresponded to names, such as Chen Luo, whose word Dongliu meant "Luoshui Dongliu"; Zhao Yun, whose word Zilong was an allusion to "Yun Conglong".
Confucian successors mostly choose characters from ancient books and classics, especially the Four Books and Five Classics, so the rate of duplication of names is very high.
Small knowledge, the four books and five classics added together, less than 630,000 words.
The two names Wang Shouren and Wang Yangming are well known to later generations. Shouren is the name changed by Wang Yangming's grandfather under the guidance of an expert; and Yangming is the later name.
So the protagonist didn't notice it, so it's not a bug.
Another question, this kind of deceitful corpse is very conspicuous. In the future, the enemy can directly kill people with this characteristic?
Well, how should I say it? According to the setting, I set the land area of Daxuan roughly according to the size of Asia. Considering the supernatural power, even if it is a feudal society, the total population of Daxuan is about 2 billion.
In the setting of 80,000, there are people who can reach the level of transformation in martial arts every year, but even in the peak period of later generations, there will never be more than 1,000 people every year.
And among these thousand people, those who really have the courage to step into this realm are a little higher, about two-thirds, that is, six or seven hundred people.
Taking the 2021 census of our country as an example, the number of people who die every day is 27,781, which is 10.14 million people a year.
Randomly sprinkle six or seven hundred people into a huge base, who can say that I will kill all the fraudsters?
Finally, there are the so-called ethical issues.
Some readers said, wouldn't it be good to re-transform an independent person? Why do we have to use the means of possession?
Hmm...Should I say it or not, isn't the soul of the Internet now all possessing a body?
Seriously, it would be strange if a new person came out of illusion. Inexplicably, there is one more person in the world, and it is easy to be targeted.
After all, in the settings, only Chen Luo has memories, and the others appear with sealed memories.
Here, we can explain the ethical issues by the way.
Let’s talk about the future Transformation Warriors first.
Because Huafan's setting is to close memory, so for future warriors, whether it is reincarnation or rebirth, in short, those people think that they are the identity of the flesh. The difference in treatment is that the Martial Dao will connect with the Dao of Heaven and provide some guidance from the world of mortals. This is also the internal logic of why Chen Luo must first drive thousands of miles before they can start to transform into ordinary people.
Therefore, for these people, even if Daocheng recovered his memory after that, the bond between him and the people around him still remained.
This is also the key to Hongchen's setting - never leave Hongchen!
As for the cause and effect of the physical body, in the future, the two worlds will be unified, reincarnation will be rebuilt, whether you want to compensate for the gift of opportunity, or you want to accept it as a disciple, it all depends on the warrior's own thoughts. Anyway, how can this karma be fulfilled.
Alright, let's talk about the main character.
The protagonist's memory is not sealed (objectively speaking, if the protagonist's memory is sealed, then the previous plot is no different from the new book), some people find it awkward.
One of the most interesting comments I saw was: I thought it was the plot of the sweeping monk, how cool it is!
But big brother, the protagonist has his own memory, so he went according to the settings of the sweeping monk!
Didn't I mention it in the latest chapter, Chen Luo's current combat power, relying on his soul, is a bit more stable, and he can fight for a rank one!
This is not rehearsing trumpet!
Chen Luo's way of thinking is still the original colorful way.
It's just that Chen Luo changed his vest again!
Yes, UU Reading www.uukanshu.com Just treat this body as a high-end vest!
Huafan is just a gimmick...
-split line-
Talk about Huafan's arrangement.
In fact, as soon as Wang Yangming's identity came out, everyone should know that I have to work hard to learn.
The study of mind has been shouted out by readers since the book was hundreds of thousands of words. Until now, the time is ripe.
I think it is more appropriate to use the name of Wang Yangming in the book to create the study of mind.
Logically, the study of the mind is a science of "doing things with the heart of being out of the world", which just matches the purpose of practice at this stage of martial arts.
However, the fundamental purpose of Bawan's writing Huafan is just to pave the way for thousands of miles more reasonably, so it will not be written as a popular science article, and the plot of Huafan will not be too long.
It's just because there are other things, such as the plot of Tiger Clan, which will be interspersed, so there will be a process of several days. In short, before the Spring Festival, it will definitely drive thousands of miles.
Spoiler alert: The reason why Wang Yangming was congenitally disabled in the book is because of the limited power of the Heavenly Dao here, so such a character could not be born!
—A dividing line again—
Well, having said so much, I don't know if Bawan has explained some of the controversies clearly.
I am not afraid of abandoning the book, nor afraid of slander, but what I am afraid of is that you recognize me, but read the book with regret.
I am just a storyteller, if you like to listen to it, I am very happy.
I just want to tell the story well, if I can't tell it well, then I'll do my best. No one wants to throw pots and bowls on purpose.
The elders of Jiangshan can tolerate me and don't make money in the world!
The last sentence: There is one more chapter today!
Let's catch up on sleep first!
