F-Rank Puppeteer!! But I'll be Queen, and I'm not a narcissist!!!!!-Chapter 170: Mind Alteration (R-18)
"Has Evelyn ever thought about how proud Esther would be of you when she sees your achievements?" I ask while removing Evelyn’s upper garments, her weak mental defense doing nothing to stop me.
"Killing is part of being a general. You can feel sad about killing if you want, but you need to hide it. Because strong people don’t show weakness." I look at Evelyn’s naked body. She’s undoubtedly quite beautiful.
’Ah, how I wish I were playing with the real body instead of this mental projection.’ I run my hands gently over her stomach. She’s stopped crying because her brain here on the spiritual plane has shifted its focus.
"Think about it, Evelyn. Esther praising you for your deeds in the war. The sense of accomplishment you’ll feel when Esther tells you how proud she is of you." I say, holding her exposed breasts and pressing her nipples.
She breathes heavily, her body reacting mainly to my words. I gently bite her ear with soft sucks while keeping her seated on my lap.
’Hmm... her reaction is still a bit weak... this approach isn’t good. I should change... If not pride, what does Evelyn desire from Esther?’ She reacts to the word Esther, but not well when I talk about pride.
I remove her panties and skirt, leaving her completely naked. Since this current body of hers is a representation of her mind, the clothes have no function of hiding her nudity; they are, metaphorically speaking, what hides her mind.
Without clothes, I can see more easily how she reacts to my words. I think about what to say.
’What Evelyn desires from Esther...’ I quickly think back on the interactions between the two that I’ve seen. What made Evelyn happiest and what made her saddest. She didn’t like it when Esther insulted her, or when Esther complained about what she did.
But she liked the rewards she got when she did something Esther liked. It wasn’t even so much about the praise, but the reward.
’Reward... I can’t give gold to Evelyn in here... but rewarding her... I think I can...’ I lay Evelyn on the floor on her back and climb on top of her.
Soon I slip my fingers into her mouth while trying to replicate the taste of Esther’s Hikishin. It’s just a memory, so it should be possible, and as expected, Evelyn’s body reacts and she begins to suck on my fingers.
"Evelyn, have you ever imagined the rewards you can earn by killing people?" I change the focus. Instead of making Evelyn just try to hide what she feels, I’ll direct her mind to the reward she gains from killing.
"Just imagine, Evelyn. All the pleasure and love Esther can give you. All the gold you can get from the Demon King." She reacts strongly to the words about rewards.
"That’s it, Evelyn. Just imagine all the benefits. Your enemies don’t matter. All that matters is if you’re alive and the people you love are safe, right?" I play with her mouth, moving my fingers inside.
She blushes. Another good involuntary reaction from her body. I gently rub my fingers over her tongue.
"And your mother. Remember your mother, Evelyn? Don’t you want to make her proud? To have a family that rewards you for how incredible you are?" I grab one of her breasts and begin to massage it. She lets out a moan—the first audible response she’s given.
In simpler terms, it’s the first barrier of her brain breaking. She’s letting me into her mind. Even unconscious people still capture and store information, and Evelyn is doing that now. My words are passing through the filter of her brain and being stored.
’Okay... I’m doing well... I must be careful with what I say now so as not to lose progress...’ This is kind of exhausting. Interacting with Evelyn’s mind is using up my real energy.
"Hmm?!" I look outside. Evelyn’s physical body is getting wet outside. Her panties are soaked with sexual fluids. It’s kind of strange for me and makes me cross my legs as if trying to hide.
’...’ Eve doesn’t seem to have noticed the reaction, so everything is hidden for now. But that’s good. If Evelyn’s body is reacting to what I’m doing in here, it means I’m having more success than I imagined.
’It seems Evelyn is much more of a naughty girl than I expected... Or maybe... Heh... hehehehahahahaha’ I look at Evelyn, realizing something funny.
"So pure and cute. So you’re the submissive type..." Many think a submissive person is just someone who likes to be dominated, but that’s wrong. I’ve seen many creatures, animals, and even adventurers, and I understand well about action and reaction.
Submission isn’t just about wanting to be dominated and feeling pleasure from it. It’s a survival mechanism. "Weak" beings—whether physically, mentally, or spiritually—tend to be submissive.
Because those who are dominant tend to protect the submissive as an instinct and reflex. It’s all a kind of commensal relationship, where the weak depends on the strong to survive, so they instinctively just accept and obey the strong.
This is an instinct that exists within all beings, but tends to awaken or be eliminated in the younger stages of life. And in some it’s stronger, while in others it’s weaker.
Of course, this is all a belief of mine developed over years of observation and learning, and not everything must be correct.
Evelyn is submissive. She is weak, and probably because she was mistreated by everyone around her, she became a submissive who, when pressured, breaks down.
Obviously, not everything is like that. There are the different ones. There are those submissive by choice and those forced to be submissive. And dominants tend to choose submissives just because they’re easier to control, and the protection is just an extra!
I understand that. Everything changes depending on each one’s dynamics. However, Evelyn is fundamentally here on the spiritual plane. This thing I’m touching is her brain represented spiritually.
It doesn’t react in a way it wasn’t created to be. In other words, if the Evelyn I’m manipulating now reacts submissively, it’s because naturally she was always like that. Because that’s how the spiritual plane works; it only adds base things that already existed before.
But none of that matters! What matters is: if Evelyn is submissive, her relationship with Esther and what she seeks from that relationship isn’t just interest or gains. She seeks comfort and protection, just as she seeks love.
"Ah, ah, it’s so sweet to see you believe in love in such a pure and naive way." I run my fingers gently over her cheek inside her opened mouth. Evelyn is so cute.
"I think I’ve never seen anyone as cute as you in my life. If I had known you were like this before, I would have stolen you for myself before making a forced contract... What a pity... Now it’s kind of late..." I take my fingers out of her mouth and put them in mine, tasting her saliva.
"Hmm... But now I know how to manipulate you into killing people without completely breaking down..." I move my hand down to her intimate parts, descending slowly, watching her body shiver.
"Evelyn, have you ever stopped to think about the truth you’re ignoring out of fear?" I begin to speak with a sweet, honeyed tone.
"The truth that you love Esther, and Esther loves you, but you ignore her love because you’re afraid you’ll be disappointed in the end?! Isn’t that why you try so hard—to be truly worthy of the love you want to receive?" When I say this and touch her intimate parts, she trembles more than any other time.
"..." The spiritual plane shifts slightly. I can feel it. This question deeply shook Evelyn’s mind. In the end, someone only sees the truth they ignore when someone externally speaks that truth.
’I knew it...’ She sees herself as unworthy of Esther’s love. It’s not just fear. She feels so inferior to others that she thinks she doesn’t deserve to receive love from anyone, and that makes her ignore the love that’s right in front of her.
"Evelyn, if you see yourself as incapable of receiving love from others because you’re unworthy, then why not become worthy of that love? You’re right. You are pathetic, weak, and unworthy of love. So strive for it." I begin to shake her mind further.
"Kill people to be worthy of the love you so desperately yearn to receive. Obey Esther to be worthy of her attention. Become strong even if you feel sad, scared, and in pain." I slip my fingers into her intimate parts, which are wet.
"No one wants to see other people sad, collapsing, and breaking down in tears. Dominant people like Esther don’t want that. They want a happy submissive who hides her sadness and delivers only their joy." I move my fingers inside her warm pussy.
Manipulating her brain into believing this is good, even if it’s not. This world is cruel, and Evelyn, fragile like this, will be devoured by this world before she grows. So until she grows enough, she’ll have to hide her pain and act as she must always act.
"H-Hmm..." She cums, wetting my fingers with her fluids while I see tears streaming from only one of her eyes. This is a great sign. Because this body represents her brain, her spirit, and her will.
If only half of her body shows a reaction, but the other half doesn’t, it means she is divided between the choices.
"So sweet..." I lick my fingers, tasting her fluids. I feel so hot too. The spiritual plane is affected by Evelyn’s state, and her physical state is affecting me because I’m in her body.
"..." In reality, Evelyn’s body falls to its knees while I’m holding Eve’s hand. Evelyn’s mental climax also affected her body, and Evelyn is so sensitive and fragile that it was kind of strong for me.
Eve looks at me with confusion, not understanding why she fell, but I stand up, pretending everything is normal while feeling the drops running down my thighs.
"Ah, I love this. I love this so much." I feel so happy—a euphoria I haven’t felt in years. The sensation of manipulating another being like this, altering their very morality, gives me the satiation I’ve always sought as a nymph.
"A little more... Just a little more and you’ll lose your defenses, Evelyn." I lick my fingers seductively, ready to finish what I started.
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Galaxy’s Note
Hello readers! Normally I wouldn’t give this note, because all of you readers already know that 100% of the sex scenes in this work have a narrative purpose! They are all useful for something in the story!
But this current scene is complex. Why? Because it is not about eroticism, sex, or pleasure. It has no basis in anything sexual; in fact, it’s the opposite.
It was made to be uncomfortable when interpreted correctly. It is a mental manipulation. The act that seems sexual is merely Arial molding Evelyn’s brain with false stimuli while trying to bend Evelyn’s will onto another path.
It’s practically psychological conditioning, so much so that we see Evelyn doesn’t give in at once. She slowly breaks down until the current scene, where only half of her accepts and the other half denies, showing she isn’t fully "convinced" yet.
I want you to interpret the scene for what it is—not something sexual, but a scene of a terrible monster trying to change the mind of our protagonist, who is trying to resist but is fragile from what she committed before.
This is Evelyn’s first great trial—a dark moment in the story where we see Evelyn trying to resist something that will make her less human.
The scene is not something good, nor cool, nor acceptable. It is tragic when well interpreted! And it represents both characters well—both Evelyn and Arial, who is a monster without human morals!
I’m sorry to put the note here. I know putting the note increases the Chapter’s price, but I judged that this scene is easy to misinterpret, and if misinterpreted, it loses a lot of its depth. Because this scene is too important for the story. It shows Evelyn morally trying to resist something her mind knows is wrong.
This scene will greatly affect the future and logic of the story, and for that I hope you are enjoying it and reflecting on how Evelyn’s perseverance, even if weak, is something that exists.
It’s quite dark, without a doubt, but it was already expected that the story would start to get darker as it advanced. And each of you readers can interpret the scene as you see fit and feel whatever you want to feel about it!! ...Now, let’s wait and see what will happen to Evelyn, and happy reading.







