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... I discussed this idea with others, they said that it seemed too hasty . After I wrote it, people did, in fact, say it seemed rushed . Yeah, it may seem rushed, and as to why everyone said this, I could probably guess why . This is because, in many books, this defloration situation could be considered one of the highlights as a big climax . The process leading up to the moment is brilliant and then after that climax, it’s common to change to the next female character . This is an ordinary, regula ...
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