Rebate King: Every Beauty I Spoil Makes Me a Billionaire
Chapter 62: Critical Window
"And soft chicken is... A tragedy," Sophie said flatly. "An absolute tragedy."
Stan smiled despite himself. He drifted behind her again, drawn back to her waist the way you drift toward warmth without quite deciding to. His hands settled there, and this time Sophie didn’t pause.
She simply continued tending the pan, tilting her head slightly as she leaned forward to check the crust on the first piece, and he felt her settle back incrementally against him with the unconscious ease of someone who’d already decided this was allowed.
"Don’t distract me now," she said, focused. "The crust is forming. This is a critical window."
"I’m not distracting you. I’m observing."
"You have very distracting hands."
"Very skilled hands, actually. I’d make an excellent masseur. You’re clearly enjoying it, and I’m not even moving."
"That’s somehow worse." She let out a soft breath, the corner of her mouth lifting as she reached for the tongs. "Alright, first flip."
She turned the pieces with care, and the other side was golden , properly, deeply golden, the kind of color that meant the coating had done exactly what it was supposed to do. The new surface hit the oil and sizzled in fresh satisfaction.
"There," she said, quiet and pleased.
"That’s impressive."
"That’s a Sunday recipe that’s survived three generations," she corrected, though she was smiling. "I’m just the current carrier."
Stan looked at her profile , the focus in her eyes, the slight flush of the kitchen heat on her cheeks, the way she’d tucked one side of her hair back at some point without him noticing, to keep it clear of the stove.
He turned her, gently, just enough.
She let him, tongs still in hand, one eyebrow raised in questioning amusement.
He kissed her again. Unhurried. No agenda. Just because she was standing here in her kitchen, explaining oil temperatures to him with the gravity of someone passing on inherited knowledge, and it seemed like the only reasonable response.
Sophie kissed him back, briefly, warmly, and then leaned her forehead against his chin.
"The chicken," she reminded him.
"I know."
"I’m serious, Stan. I didn’t marinate it at six in the morning to let it burn."
"You’re not going to let it burn."
"Not if you let me turn around." But she didn’t immediately move. Just stood there for a second, her forehead against him, the sizzle of the pan filling the warm kitchen air between them.
Then she stepped back, turned back to the stove, and with tremendous professional dignity, checked the crust on all four pieces.
"Perfect," she announced.
"Obviously."
She pointed the tongs at him without looking. "Don’t."
"I didn’t say anything."
"You were about to say something."
"I was going to say the crust looks excellent."
Sophie lowered the tongs. A reluctant smile worked its way across her face.
"It does look excellent," she conceded.
The oven timer counted down. Sophie moved between the stove and the counter with the quiet efficiency of someone cooking on a track she’d memorized, flipping the fries at the halfway mark , already pale gold at the edges, just beginning to catch, then returning to rotate the chicken pieces before transferring them to the second tray and sliding them in alongside to finish.
The kitchen smelled extraordinary now. Deep and savory and warm, with the faint sweetness of the garlic beginning to toast, the layered spice of the coating.
The kind of smell that changes a room, turns a space into somewhere a person might actually want to stay.
At some point, Stan hopped up onto the counter, an unspoken liberty. Sophie hadn’t invited it, but she hadn’t told him to find a chair either, which he took as permission enough, and settled there to watch.
She worked on the back half of the counter, pulling together a scratch-made dipping sauce with quiet focus. A spoonful of sambal went in first, followed by a drizzle of something amber. She squeezed in fresh citrus by hand, then adjusted the balance with a small pinch from an unlabelled jar, moving with the ease of someone who didn’t need to measure to get it right.
She squeezed in fresh citrus by hand, then adjusted the balance with a small pinch from an unlabelled jar, moving with the ease of someone who didn’t need to measure to get it right.
"You’re not going to tell me what’s in it," Stan said.
"I’ll tell you if you like it."
"And if I don’t?"
"Then it doesn’t matter." She tasted it off the edge of the spoon, considered, added a fraction more citrus. "But you’ll like it."
"You’re very certain."
"I know what you ate for lunch." She glanced at him over her shoulder, serene. "I’ve done the research."
Stan looked at her. "Mhmm..."
"I’m thorough." She set the sauce aside, covered, and turned to check the oven through the glass door. "Four minutes. Maybe five."
"It smells incredible."
"I know." She stood, hands braced on the counter edge, surveying the kitchen with quiet satisfaction. "It’s almost done."
Stan watched her. The easy pride in her expression, the way she looked at a kitchen she’d been in for less than twenty-four hours as if it were already entirely hers.
He slid off the counter, crossed the small distance, and came to stand behind her again. His arms folded loosely around her from behind, his chin coming to rest lightly at the top of her shoulder. Sophie stiffened for half a second, then softened completely, her hands relaxing on the counter, her head tilting just slightly to one side.
Outside the balcony doors, the city had gone full dark. The lights were out in their thousands now, scattered and brilliant, and the candles on the balcony table were still unlit, waiting.
"When it comes out," Sophie said quietly, "I was thinking we eat outside. If you want."
"That’s exactly what i want."
She turned her head, her cheek nearly against his. "Good."
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A/N:
Mass release (3/3) - thank you for reading and supporting!
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