Ultimate Dragon System: Grinding my way to the Top-Chapter 181: Jelo vs Raken pt two
The arena grew tense.
Dust floated through the air as Jelo and Raken stood facing each other, the silence between them heavier now than it had been at the start. The crowd had gone quieter too — no longer the loose, excited murmur of students watching a sparring match, but the held-breath stillness of people watching something they weren’t sure how to name yet.
Raken slowly cracked his neck, one side and then the other. The sound carried.
"You’ve done well so far," he said. His voice was unhurried, almost conversational, like he was commenting on someone’s form in a training drill. "But you haven’t seen my real power yet."
Atlas leaned forward from the sidelines, his arms braced against the barrier rail.
"Here it comes..."
Mira watched silently, her two clones standing beside her — perfectly still, perfectly mirrored, their eyes tracking the same point in the arena center that hers were. She hadn’t spoken in several minutes. That alone told Atlas everything he needed to know about how seriously she was taking this.
Raken clenched his fists.
Something shifted in the air around him — not visible at first, more like a pressure change, the kind you felt in your chest before you could explain it. Then the ground beneath his feet simply shattered.
Not crumbled. Not cracked. Shattered, like the stone beneath him had been struck from below by something with no patience for resistance.
A strange energy spread outward from his body, pulsing through the arena floor in waves — not fire, not electricity, not any element the watching students could put a name to. It moved like vibration given weight. Like sound turned solid.
The students nearest the front stepped back without deciding to.
"What is that...?" one of them whispered.
Raken smirked. He let them feel it for a moment before answering — gave the energy time to settle into the floor, into the walls, into the bones of everyone watching.
"My ability is Impact Drive."
He slammed his foot into the ground. 𝓯𝓻𝒆𝙚𝒘𝓮𝙗𝓷𝒐𝓿𝙚𝒍.𝙘𝓸𝙢
BOOM!
The shockwave didn’t travel in a line — it exploded outward in all directions, a circular pulse that cracked stone and kicked dust into the air and hit the surrounding barriers like a physical wall.
The crowd flinched back in a wave.
Jelo used Wing Burst instantly, his body vanishing from his position before the shockwave reached him — a sharp displacement of air marking where he’d been.
But when he reappeared—
Raken was already there.
Not running toward him. Already there, as if he had predicted the exact point of arrival and simply moved to meet it while Jelo was still mid-displacement.
"How—?"
CRASH!
Raken’s punch slammed into Jelo’s guard with everything behind it. Even with Skilled Guard active — even with his skin hardened, his posture braced — the force didn’t care. Impact Drive didn’t just add strength to a hit. It amplified the momentum at the moment of contact, multiplying what was already a devastating punch into something closer to being struck by a moving wall.
Jelo went flying.
He crossed the arena in a single violent arc and hit the ground rolling, his shoulder taking the first impact, then his side, his momentum finally burning itself out as he scraped to a stop near the far barrier. The stone around his landing point was cracked.
Atlas grimaced, one hand pressed over his mouth. "That hit looked brutal."
Mira nodded, her voice low and even. "Raken just increased the momentum of his own movement." She paused. "He’s not just hitting harder. He’s making himself faster at the point of impact. The two compound each other."
Atlas stared at her. "Is that supposed to make me feel better?"
She didn’t answer.
Jelo slowly stood up again.
His chest rose and fell as he breathed heavily, the kind of deep, deliberate breathing that meant he was pulling himself back together from the inside out rather than the outside in. One knee up first. Then the other. He straightened slowly, and when he was fully upright he stood still for a moment — not frozen, just still, like something settling back into place.
His arm ached beneath the guard. His ribs on the left side were going to be something unpleasant tomorrow.
Raken walked toward him, unhurried.
"You’re strong," he admitted. There was no performance in the way he said it. He wasn’t complimenting Jelo for the crowd’s benefit — he was stating a conclusion he’d arrived at through evidence. "But you’re still inexperienced."
He pointed at Jelo, two fingers extended, the gesture almost clinical.
"I can feel it."
The ground trembled again as Raken rushed forward — not the same slow walk this time, but the real thing, Impact Drive already building in his legs as he closed the distance.
This time Jelo didn’t dodge.
He didn’t shift his weight, didn’t trigger Wing Burst, didn’t bring his guard up. He stood there and let Raken come, and for a long half-second the crowd must have thought he had simply run out of options — that his body had finally decided it was done.
But his eyes were closed.
Not from pain. Not from exhaustion.
Deliberately closed.
He was somewhere else for that half-second. Not the arena, not the crowd, not the sound of Raken’s footsteps accelerating across cracked stone.
He remembered the training with Chloro — not as a clear memory with edges and details, but as a feeling. The way Chloro had talked about fire like it was something that already knew what it wanted to do, and the job of the user was mostly to stop getting in the way. Heat control. Compression. The difference between flame that scattered and flame that gathered. Focus — not as effort, but as the absence of noise.
The flame in his hand slowly changed.
It didn’t flare up. It didn’t grow louder. It did the opposite — it drew inward, pulled itself tight, shed everything that wasn’t essential. The wild, reactive flicker of it settled. Compressed. The color deepened, shifting from orange to red to something darker and older at the center.
Dense.
Ancient.
