MTL - Valkyrie of the Marvel Universe-Chapter 265 to two hundred and eighty-seven

In the reader group today, a master reader said that the final melee should be the climax, but he didn't feel anything after watching it.

I re-edited and looked through it, and it really feels that it is not in place, the lines are not strong enough, there is no momentum, and there is no feeling of blood boiling during the battle.

So today I revised chapters 265 to 287.

Make the lines stronger, more imposing, and the battle scenes more passionate.

If you are interested, you can read it again without resubscribing.

Some are modified more, some are modified less.

Basically, the original chapter is 2,000 words, and the revised one is at least 2,200 words, and the maximum is more than 2,800 words.

I did a little statistics, and at least I wrote more than 5,000 words, which can be regarded as an apology for everyone.

In the past, for the sake of daily life, I took the time to catch up on the manuscript every day. There are indeed many places where the writing is not detailed enough. If you feel that something is not good, you can say it in the chapter review or short review, or you can add readers to express your personal opinions.

As long as it makes sense, I will correct it carefully.