MTL - The Barrage Said, I Am the Final Villain In the Game-~ A brief summary at the end of the month

  Summary at the end of the month

  Speaking of it, this seems to be the first time I have written some summaries and the like. I haven’t even written anything about the content of the book in my testimonials, so I want to try writing it.

  This book was opened in mid-August, and it has been two and a half months now.

  The most satisfying part of writing should be the first ten chapters. When the book is opened, the enthusiasm for creation is always the most abundant, and I like what I write.

  Like the sentence at the end of Chapter 10, I didn’t think much of it when I coded it out, so I read it again after I coded it.

   Damn, can I write such a handsome sentence (laughs)

However, with the daily serialization and the harassment at work, there will always be more or less confused times, and there is no way to guarantee the enthusiasm and quality at the beginning. Overall, this book is still good and bad, and it is not considered excellent. s work.

  My writing experience is still not enough.

Counting it, I have been writing web articles for less than seven months until today. I am still a newcomer among cute newcomers. The sum of two broken books can only break a million words, which is not as good as others. One.

  When I got to some places, I deeply felt that my writing skills were insufficient, and I couldn't write what I wanted.

  The lack of writing power is generally reflected in the control of the plot.

Regardless of whether it is this book or the first one, the most criticized points are the slow progress and the unclear main line. This book is not bad. It has learned the lessons of the previous book. It has more obvious villains and lines, but relatively speaking, the main line is still relatively weak. Some, reflected in the plot, are slow to heat up.

  This may be related to my reading style.

From my writing style, you should be able to see that I am obviously inclined to light novels with a light-hearted and funny writing style, and most of the books I read are of this type, and such books usually focus on strong characters and light on the main line. So when I write, I also subconsciously focus on the character design.

   Speaking of character design.

  There are only 400,000 characters now. Apart from the protagonist, the characters that spend a lot of words to describe are actually only one and a half characters.

  Eileen counts as one, and Charlotte’s plot is only halfway through, so it can only be counted as half.

   When I was making the setting for the role of Irene, I was actually a little worried.

  I'm afraid that I won't be able to reflect her strengths, and the contradictions will not be balanced, which will cause too many shortcomings to be exposed and make everyone bored.

  However, when the pen was actually written, it was unexpectedly smooth.

   The feedback given by everyone seems to be pretty good.

  This role should be considered a success.

  For Charlotte, the plot part is not given so much yet.

  However, compared to Irene who thinks more complicatedly, she is a very simple character in my setting.

  She doesn't think about whether it will be good or not if I do this. What she thinks is very simple.

   Lynn walked up to her and she would trot forward and wrap her arms around him, it didn't matter where or when.

  [Flaring Preference] is her main theme, and [Having the qualification to accept him] is the goal she hopes to achieve.

  Of course, this thing can’t explain so much for the time being, and it still depends on the plot to reflect it.

  As for other characters, like Alyssa and Corinna, there will be corresponding plots in the future to improve the character design and reflect their own contradictions and core concepts, but that’s all for later.

This book is only 400,000 words now. According to my expectation, it should be around 2 million words when it reaches the end. The 【Royal City Wind and Cloud】.

   At this stage, it is the time when the protagonist really takes over the power of the family and becomes dominant.

  At this point, the summary of the book is almost over, and the following is a digression.

  Writing the book so far, the best praise I have received may be "no poisonous points", but it is strange that there are so many negative reviews.

  Due to special reasons in recent days, this chapter says it is unrealistic, but the author can see it in the background.

   Just before coding this summary, I saw an unexpected "bad review."

  【I went to watch the pirated version】

I:"?"

In fact, whether it is this book or the last book, the proportion of readers who read pirated editions accounts for a large part. The last book is close to 50,000 collections, the last chapter is subscribed to less than 100, and the retention rate of pirated editions hovers around 55%. .

  This book is not too different, both have a subscription ratio of close to 30:1.

  I have never complained to anyone, and in the book friend group, I just said that my writing is not good, but this face-off makes me a little sad.

  Of course, I don’t mean to accuse anyone when I say this, just read the novel for fun, as long as you are happy, don’t take it too seriously.

  Finally, a summary of codewords.

  Although there is no mention of adding changes on the surface, in fact, according to the rules of adding changes set in the testimonials on the shelves, it is actually exceeding the amount.

  Last month was free for most of the time, and 150,900 words were updated.

  Updated 170,100 words this month.

   After two and a half months, there is only one day off.

   It should be said that it is more than enough than the top and more than the bottom.

  Next month, strive to move towards 180,000 words.

come on! Come on!

thanks for your support.

Other.

  Ask for leave today, nothing more.

  (end of this chapter)