MTL - Once, I Wanted To Be a Good Person (I Wanted To Be A Good Person Once)-Chapter 55 I really can't stand it anymore, open it up

  Chapter 55 is really unbearable. Let’s open a big chapter to briefly explain and talk about it.

   In the past few days, there have been many quarrels and scolding among book friends in this chapter.

   I've been there to persuade and explain. But there are too many, so I can only talk about it in a single chapter.

  My book is a work of transformation. Everything is crossing the river by feeling the stones. I also know that my writing skills are limited, so if you have any opinions, I have always looked at it, and then I have changed it.

   For example, a book friend said that it is more appropriate to change the disposable Noble Phantasm to a consumable Noble Phantasm.

   I thought it was really good, so I changed it.

   For example, a book friend said: Chapter 53 The Shadow Warrior said goodbye in his heart, it was too embarrassing to write.

   Although I feel very moved. But I deleted those sentences anyway.

   For example, a book friend said: The protagonist sat in front of the grave for a long time before going to examine the body, which was too wise.

   I actually didn’t feel very good when I wrote it, but to express the sadness of the protagonist, I wrote it like that. After it was sent out, everyone mentioned it, and I changed it.

   There are some others, everyone pointed out, I found that there are indeed problems, but the plot is already like this, there is no way to change it.

   For example, everyone said: The protagonist activates his ability and shouts out. So embarrassing.

  To be honest. Maybe I haven’t written this type of essay, so I felt quite enthusiastic when I wrote it. So that's what I wrote.

   As a result, everyone is embarrassed, I want to change it. But I found that the plot was not coherent, and that was the only way to go.

   This is really a question of my ability. I'm sorry everyone.

   And there are still some opinions. After seeing it, I actually feel very uncomfortable. Because everyone didn't read it carefully, or forgot to set it. Here, I also explain together.

   For example, some book friends questioned why we didn’t use usury to remove the mark.

  Usury is not a wishing machine. At this stage, it can only increase (that is to say, the protagonist must have it before it can be used), but cannot remove things.

   Even before I was afraid that everyone would not understand it, I spent a few hundred words explaining its logic (Chapter 51) before the plot started.

Another example. Some book friends said that the money and goods in Chapter 53 to repay loan sharks are mechanical serenity. Or killing the rangers with loan sharks is a mechanical seance.

  You can go back to Chapter 32 to take a look.

  When I acquired the ability, I wrote that it could be repaid with money and items.

  The original words are [Fang Ze can use any money, items, and even "effort (but no gain of equal value to repay. ].

   So, from the beginning, this was the ability setting. Not really a mechanical seance.

   As for the crystals and money that the protagonist got, the female knife in chapter 30 brought the gang's grocery store and gave it to Miaomiao, and chapter 31 Miaomiao gave it to the protagonist. That's why gangs surrounded the streets to track down Miao Miao's plot.

   Moreover, I have always said that this ability is very good, very good. Can be used as a trump card.

   Then, the plot is specially designed to let the protagonist get money, let the protagonist exercise, and get the stunt of [throwing a stick]. And also used the throwing stick in front of the trio, paving the way for the power of the throwing stick.

   After so much foreshadowing, it was only when he used it that he was able to destroy the high-level awakened person with a half-dead body. I don’t think this can really be regarded as a mechanical seance.

   After all, if there is no throwing stick, without the protagonist's previous exercise, and without that money, the protagonist cannot kill the ranger. I have a foreshadowing.

   Another example is the identification ability of the late-night investigation room. In other words, the ability to "identify extraordinary items" appeared out of thin air.

   You can go back and look at all the chapters that have been harvested (Chapter 12, Chapter 18, Chapter 25, Chapter 28, Chapter 34). They are only items with extraordinary power, and the investigation room will release information.

   And the only common item obtained once: Porcelain bowl. I deliberately took it in one stroke, I didn't write the information, I just wanted to dig this small hole, and then I will give you a surprise when it is revealed that the investigation room has identification capabilities. (Chapter 40)

   Even at the very beginning (Chapter 12), I hinted at getting normal items, without any information.

And in the next chapter, I also wrote the reason for this logic: the investigation room can allow the protagonist to perceive the emotions of the person under investigation and hear the other party's inner thoughts, which is actually equivalent to a kind of "appraisal", so you can know The real information of extraordinary items is actually in line with the capabilities of the entire investigation room.

   And there are still some small details to question.

  For example, in Chapter 26, some book friends said that Bai Zhi can analyze so many psychological activities of the protagonist? You can't even see the micro expressions.

  Because I wrote: Baizhi has a camera, which captures the protagonist's expressions and movements when he speaks. Zoom in frame by frame for analysis.

  For example, in Chapter 41, some people say that Bai Zhi is stupid, and if she is really smart, she will record the results of the polygraph.

   is actually recorded. Because she videotaped the whole process, and the Noble Phantasm was broken when the 26th person was played backwards, indicating that 4 people lied in front of her.

   For example, in Chapter 53, the chasing troops are coming soon. The protagonist was seriously injured, so he took the forest ranger to investigate, how could he have time? Isn't this just the right way to deliver food?

  Because I wrote it in detail in Chapter 49: The news that Jinhu only knew after the death of the trio.

   Chapter 51 also writes: He can only estimate the ranger's itinerary.

   This shows that he judges the success or failure of the mission by the life and death of the members. Therefore, if the ranger is not dead, at most he thinks that the other party has not caught up with the protagonist (after all, he thinks that the protagonist has the awakening ability to escape)

   For another example, some book friends questioned before, why didn't he kill the protagonist when he killed Han Kaiwei's mouth?

  Because it is written in Chapter 40: The protagonist is Baizhi's last hope to solve the case. With him, Baizhi will not go crazy, and Jinhu will have time to continue looking for that thing. And the protagonist has amnesia and will not expose the organization. So no need to shut up.

   For another example, someone asked why the organization was brainstorming to hunt down a peripheral member.

   Because I wrote in chapter 44: Jinhu suspects that what he is looking for is obtained by the protagonist. The reason is: that thing can awaken people, and can "enlighten" many extraordinary treasures. Same as the protagonist.

   And he is not chasing the protagonist, but to bring the protagonist back.

   As for other doubts, there are also some. But because the plot hasn't been written yet.

  For example, a few days ago, Jinhu said: Then send him?

   As a result, many book friends are arguing, saying that they are downcast, and they say that the soldiers-elite-little bosses have been delivering food to the protagonist. I don't know how to send a master over there.

   But in fact, it was explained in the chapter on the second day: that is to send a master over

   Ranger is a high-level Awakener, comparable to a Fusion in the jungle. Under normal circumstances, the protagonist, who is a newly awakened person, cannot hurt him 100%, and can be taken away by pure crushing.

   Another example is when I wrote yesterday that the protagonist was beaten by a ranger, and some book friends quarreled, saying that the protagonist's abilities were too rubbish.

   But after reading this chapter today, you will know that it is not garbage, but too strong.

   So another book friend said it was going to collapse.

  To be honest, I’ve been a bit physically and mentally exhausted these past few days because of the doubts and quarrels mentioned in this chapter.

   Moreover, the results of our book are not as good as my previous book. This made me even more tired.

  I really want to write a good book, a book that creates a wonderful world with interesting and cool stories.

   So I have been preparing for more than half a year, and the outline has been knocked down several editions, so I have this book.

   I am indeed writing this type of book for the first time. I have no experience, and my writing is very general. Some battle scenes are a bit embarrassing, and the pretence is a bit blunt, but I have been working hard. Every time I write a plot, I will keep looking at the similar plots written by the gods, and then compare the ones written by myself, and then change.

   So, I'm really trying.

  Old readers know that my mentality is of a particularly bad kind. I am especially vulnerable to negative reviews. Also known as the glass heart.

   So, I hope everyone can be kind to me.

   And because our book has a slight suspense, detective elements, if I really set the ambush too deep, or the writing is not clear.

  If everyone needs it, I can also simply restore the events from the perspective of God in each volume. Make everyone feel comfortable.

   and open a single chapter to collect everyone's questions and make a summary.

  I can guarantee that I will write it well to the end, and our book must be a cool article and will not abuse the master. The logic of the big plot can basically go through, and it can be found from the foreshadowing.

  I really just want to finish this book well and let myself realize my dream.

   So, I hope you can read our book happily. I hope you can stay with our book until the end. Don't fight, don't scold me.

  Thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you all

   (end of this chapter)