I Ruined the Long Ao Tian Script-Chapter 152
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Thread: The grand male-centric xianxia epic "Path to Immortality" has reached its finale! Click to witness Lu Beichen's journey of "waking with a sword to kill, resting drunk in the lap of beauty"!
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1st Floor
Lmao, another rushed ending, and the mods are still promoting it here.
2nd Floor
Hell yeah, support Author Li Fei! Can't wait for the next work!
3rd Floor
Reply to 1st Floor: Haters are faster than fans, impressive.
4th Floor
Reply to 3rd Floor: So telling the truth makes me a hater? The author abandoned the story—can’t we call it out? Rushed ending, rushed ending, rushed ending!
5th Floor
OP’s tone is a bit aggressive, but Li Fei promised early on that Lu Beichen would ascend to the immortal realm. I was waiting for him to meet even more top-tier beauties in the celestial world, but nope—it ended at the Tribulation Stage.
6th Floor
Reply to 5th Floor: That doesn’t count as a rushed ending, does it? I think stopping here works fine. Lu’s already a winner—got power and girls. The rest is up to readers’ imaginations.
7th Floor
The rest would just be more of the same—Lu getting stronger, strongest in the world, blah blah.
8th Floor
Lmao, people are seriously analyzing this trashy harem novel?
9th Floor
Reply to 8th Floor: You good, bro? If you don’t like it, why click the thread?
10th Floor
Reply to 9th Floor: I’ll click whatever I want. Is this forum your male-centric novel’s fan club?
And "Author Li Fei"? That guy writes based on dreams, yet you all act like he’s some genius.
11th Floor
Agree with 1st and 4th floors. Rushed ending is rushed ending. Only those with nothing but smut in their brains would think marrying a bunch of beauties counts as a "perfect ending."
12th Floor
Reply to 11th Floor: Li Fei’s novels have always been like this—full of girls. If you don’t like harem tropes, don’t read it.
13th Floor
Reply to 10th Floor: Genuinely curious, what’s this "writing based on dreams" thing?
14th Floor
OP, it’s about how Li Fei once said the inspiration for "Path to Immortality" came from a dream.
Supposedly, he dreamed of vivid characters but forgot most of the plot upon waking, only remembering fragments—like the cultivation world’s setting, the Lingxiao Sect and Dustless Island, an engaged couple named Lu Beichen and Xu Shulou, and a junior sister Bai Roushuang who seemed to have a crush on Lu. He built the whole novel around that.
15th Floor
Who believes that? These days, even writing a book needs a backstory? A dream? Why not claim he time-traveled and saw it firsthand?
16th Floor
Reply to 15th Floor: No amount of salt changes the fact that this novel’s popular.
17th Floor
Reply to 16th Floor: Popular my ass.
18th Floor
Let’s be real, "Path to Immortality" was pretty popular. The plot’s wish-fulfillment—Lu’s OP from the start, stumbling into treasures and beauties left and right. But then it ended right after the wedding arc, and Li Fei never delivered the promised ascension epilogue. So mad.
19th Floor
Just brainless power fantasy.
20th Floor
Reply to 14th Floor: Honestly, the dream thing makes sense. Some parts of the worldbuilding are weirdly detailed for a wish-fulfillment novel.
21st Floor
Reply to 20th Floor: Translation: The setting’s well-built, but the character dynamics are trash.
22nd Floor
Reply to 21st Floor: …
23rd Floor
Reply to 17th Floor: Stay mad. Li Fei’s successful enough to get a live-action adaptation.
24th Floor
Some washed-up director and a low-budget web drama? That’s your flex? Hilarious.
25th Floor
Can we stop feeding the troll? Let’s actually discuss the plot.
26th Floor
Yeah, let’s talk about the story. Came here for discussion, not a flame war.
27th Floor
Reply to 23rd Floor: Ooo, wonder who’ll play my favorite Bai Roushuang.
28th Floor
Reply to 27th Floor: Rumor says it’s an up-and-coming actress. Dunno if it’s true.
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29th Floor
Drools Exactly my type—sweet and innocent.
30th Floor
Hope Xu Shulou’s actress is a stunner too. Love watching beauties fight.
31st Floor
Reply to 28th Floor: A trashy harem drama thinking an A-lister would stoop to this? Keep dreaming.
32nd Floor (Moderator)
User in 31st Floor banned for 24h. Keep it civil, folks.
33rd Floor
Finally. That guy was spamming everywhere.
34th Floor
+1. So annoying. The comment section was full of these during serialization, and Li Fei’s easily influenced. Some arcs got butchered because of it.
35th Floor
Remember how Xu Shulou was originally more talented than Lu? Some readers threw a fit—they wanted Lu to be the strongest—so Li Fei had her crippled and exiled.
Then another group got mad: "Xu’s a beauty with an engagement—we expected her to join the harem! Why this tragedy?"
So the author backpedaled, making her Lu’s concubine. Ended up pissing off both sides.
36th Floor
Ohhh, that’s why Xu Shulou’s arc felt so messy.
37th Floor
Yeah, usually the strong, beautiful woman becomes the MC’s wife. But Li Fei went full subversion—had her assaulted by villains, then still shoved into the harem. Bold move.
38th Floor
Xu Shulou’s storyline was a trainwreck. Wasted potential, then forced into the harem.
39th Floor
It’s a male power fantasy. Who cares about one side heroine?
Though I recall Li Fei promising to revise her arc post-ending. Guess he had another "dream" and decided this was peak writing.
40th Floor
Simple—got paid, stopped caring.
41st Floor
Reply to 40th Floor: Ouch…
42nd Floor
But I hate Xu Shulou! I wanted her to suffer, not join the harem!
43rd Floor
Stop whining. Li Fei’s ignoring feedback. If you’re rich, go bribe the drama producers to change the ending.
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150th Floor
Damn, finally. Why does Xu Shulou—a minor character—always start wars?
151st Floor
Whatever, I’ll say it: Xu Shulou’s a scheming btch. If I transmigrated into the novel, I’d kill her first, steal Lu Beichen’s cheat items, then marry Bai Roushuang and Luo Fusheng.
152nd Floor
Reply to 150th Floor: Too soon. The fight’s not over…
153rd Floor
Reply to 151st Floor: Only Bai and Luo? What about Xiao Ya?
154th Floor
Reply to Floor 153: Xiao Ya is too arrogant, not my type.
Floor 155
Reply to Floor 151: You’ve got dreams, daring to steal girls too? The world of immortal heroes is high-risk. I’d probably just cling to Brother Lu Beichen’s coattails.
Floor 156
Here we go again with the transmigration fantasies. When it comes to daydreaming, I bow to the netizens in this forum.
Floor 157
Reply to Floor 151: Count me in for killing Xu Shulou. I can’t stand people whitewashing her, saying she’s pitiful—like the “tragic princess who lost her kingdom and family” nonsense… If she’s so miserable, why not cry in a corner instead of ruining Lu Beichen and Bai Roushuang? Also, are authors these days afraid to give toxic female characters brutal endings because of political correctness?
Floor 158
+1. How does she keep screwing over Bai Roushuang and still end up in Lu Beichen’s harem? Way too lenient.
Floor 159
If you don’t like her, others do. Stop being a parrot here.
Floor 160
If you like her, others don’t. I’ll keep criticizing. Don’t like it? Don’t read the thread.
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Floor 1001
Quoting Floor 157:
“Count me in for killing Xu Shulou. I can’t stand people whitewashing her, saying she’s pitiful—like the ‘tragic princess who lost her kingdom and family’ nonsense… If she’s so miserable, why not cry in a corner instead of ruining Lu Beichen and Bai Roushuang? Also, are authors these days afraid to give toxic female characters brutal endings because of political correctness?”
@Moderator: Sorry, please delete my previous comments.
Floor 1002
Who’s bumping this old thread? Ls, what happened to you?
Floor 1003
Reply to Floor 1002: I transmigrated.
Floor 1004
I checked Floor 1001’s past comments in this thread. At first, you kept praising “Brother Lu Beichen” and called Xu Shulou a scheming btch, a viper… What the hell happened to you in just a few months?
Floor 1011
He transmigrated.
Floor 1012
Reply to Floor 1011: Oh, brought a shill? Impressive to have two accounts.
Floor 1013
No.
I realized… they’re not for me to judge.
Floor 1021
What’s this nonsense…
Floor 1022
Reply to Floor 1016: Gotta hand it to Xu Shulou’s few fans—they’ll twist anything to keep her relevant.
Floor 1023
Boring… Transmigration? Are you in elementary school? Stop bumping this. Let it die already.
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